郑州57中九班 王梦瑶 苏珊有双神给的舞鞋，能带她离开倦怠世界。

郑州57中九班 王梦瑶 苏珊有双God give the shoes,Take her to leave tired world.

　　朴树《神给的舞鞋》

朴树[God give the shoes]

　　钢筋水泥的大城市中，来来往往穿行的行人，如同被设定了程序的机器，举手投足严格规范，天天重复着相同的事情，似乎永远不会枯燥，不会倦怠。在这埋头苦读的间隙，偶尔抬起头，望向窗外，天空灰色阴霾下的城市似乎是一个囚笼，困住了我飞向蓝天的自由之心，灯影流转间，思绪回到昨日的新闻。

钢筋水泥的大城市中,Go back and forth across the pedestrian,As the machine was set to the program,Raise your hand cast sufficient specification strictly,Repeat the same things every day,Seems to be never boring,Won't be tired.In studying this gap,Occasionally looked up,Looked out the window,The sky gray haze under the city seems to be a cage,Stuck me to fly to the blue sky freedom of heart,Between the flow of the,Thinking back to yesterday's news.

　　“据悉，南京市已有七对父母，带着孩子离开城市，去乡下享受‘桃花源’式的教育。据记者采访，回到乡下的原因之一，是父母们不忍孩子的个性被各种补习班磨灭，故举家搬迁。解决此事的根本途径便是从根本上改变中国的教育方式，不知何时才能完成呢？”主持人面带困惑地读完这段新闻，继而平淡地播报下一条。而我，却不知何时，已呆若木鸡……

"It is understood,Nanjing seven to parents,Leave the city with children,Went to the countryside to enjoy‘shangri-la’Type of education.According to reporters,One of the reasons why back to the country,Is the parents to the child's personality is covered over by all kinds of cram school,So they moved.The basic way to solve this matter is fundamentally change China's education mode,I do not know when to finish?"Host yet confused after reading this piece of news,Then under the broadcast a flatly.And I'm,But I do not know when,Has been stupefied...

　　我们自懂事起，便已在被规划好的道路上奔波，从未停下，思考自己的人生目标。

我们自懂事起,Has traveled on the planned path,Never stop,Think about your own goals in life.

　　有句话说得好：“你们为我找的路，总是让我迷路。”现如今，在升学压力如此之重的现代都市，我们的身心为所谓“孝顺”与“未来”束缚，只知道不停地学习、再学习，整体辗转于“家-学校”这两点一线，丝毫没有自由可言，在成绩的压迫下，自由丧失、个性丧失、梦想丧失。由此看来，南京市那七对父母的做法，令人敬佩与羡慕！他们的孩子，度过的才是真正的童年！

有句话说得好:"You find the way for me,Always let me get lost."These days,In the modern urban entrance pressure is so heavy,For what is called our body and mind"Filial piety"With the"In the future"bound,Only know that constantly learning/To learn,As a whole in and out"Home - school"This two point one line,No freedom at all,In the result of oppression,Loss of freedom/Loss of individuality/Dream of loss.It seems that,Nanjing, the seven practices to parents,Awesome with envy!Their children,Through the real childhood!

　　“想什么呢？快吃饭！他们的孩子将来不会有大作为！”爸爸催促着我。末了，还不忘加上一句评价。

"Want to what??Quick to eat!Their children won't have big as in the future!"Dad urged me.In the end,Don't forget to add comments.

　　我澎湃的心霎时冷了下来。对了，就是这样的话语，就是这样的痛楚，泯灭了我最初对自由的向往。它们在寂静的深夜中，一点点侵蚀掉我对自由的憧憬，最终，它只在我每每想起时，闪烁着微弱的光芒。第二天早上，那些温热的光华浸湿了枕头，随后风干，如同从未存在。

我澎湃的心霎时冷了下来.For the,Is such a word,Is such a pain,Vanished I was yearning for freedom.They are the silent night,A little bit to eat me a vision of freedom,In the end,It is only when I often think of,Beaming faint.In the morning,Those warm guanghua pillow soaked,Then air dry,As there has never.

　　那些在枯燥学业和紧张压力下爆发的呐喊，那些在晴朗蓝天下对自由的诺言，就这么无声无息地消散在风中了吗？

那些在枯燥学业和紧张压力下爆发的呐喊,The promise of liberty under the clear blue sky,So silently to dissipate in the wind?

　　你不了解，在学校安静、认真、循规蹈矩的我内心对于自由的渴望，只不过，它被我埋藏在心底，很深、很深……

你不了解,Quiet at school/seriously/Rules of my inner desire for freedom,Nothing more than,It was I buried in the bottom of my heart,Very deep/Very deep...

　　可是，现实太过无情，它总是粉碎人们最初的梦。自由，若只能建立在完成学业、成家立业的基础上，到那时，还是我现在所向往的自由吗？你在午夜梦回时，梦到过吗？一个人踏上异乡的土地，阳光下，那畅快自由的呼吸弥漫着快乐，随心所欲地做自己真正喜欢的事。那时，我相信，一定会有温润的感动，从眼角落下。不过，那一天，太远、太远……

可是,Reality is too cruel,It's always crush people the original dream.free,If only based on complete their studies/On the basis of adults,At that time,Still now, I want freedom?When you in the mid-night,Dreamed about??A person set foot on foreign land,The sun,With the freedom of breathing filled with happiness,Follow one's inclinations to do what you really like.At that time,I believe that,There must be a warm moved,Down the corner of my eye.but,On that day,Too far away/Too far away...

　　可是有时，我也想自由。尽管明知那是可望而不可即的一件事，却仍然向往。即使它被压抑在内心深处，即使它只是一个被外人嘲笑的“谬论”，但我仍然向往，因为它是我韶华时光最美好的向往。 指导老师 李莹

可是有时,I also want to free.Despite knowing that it was and is one of the things,But still looking forward.Even if it is stressed in the deep heart's core,Even if it's just laughed at by a stranger"The myth",But I still yearning,Because it is my long time beautiful yearning. The instructor unpaid

　　【妈妈点评】

[Mother review]

　　今天，孩子的作文得了满分。捧读后，我也不禁泪流！

今天,Child's composition got full marks.Read after,I can't help tears, too!

　　现代教育方式下，孩子的所思、所想跃然纸上，我们才得以了解。为了孩子的明天，为了孩子的未来，中国有多少个家庭在同样的轨道中运行？对耶？错耶？尽管千万个家庭的父母都有同样的感受，又能怎样？是我们剥夺了孩子的童年吗？是我们侵占了孩子的自由时间吗？

现代教育方式下,Children's thinking/Think from the page,We could understand.For the children of tomorrow,In order to children's future,How many families in China run in the same orbit?yeah?Wrong"?Despite of all parents feel the same way in thousands of families,That could happen?Are we deprived children's childhood?Is encroached on our children's free time?

　　素质教育的口号喊了多少年，学生、家长却仍然摆脱不了一切围着应试指挥棒转。学生、家长不面对现实，可能吗？

素质教育的口号喊了多少年,students/Parents still can't get away from everything around examination baton.students/Parents don't face the reality,Is it possible?

　　悲哀，却又很无奈！

悲哀,But very helpless!

　　一个面临中招考试的孩子的真实想法，虽然表述稚嫩，但仍令人动容。

一个面临中招考试的孩子的真实想法,Although the expression of immature,But still touching.