200字小说写下浓缩版“小剧场” Write 200 word novel condensed version"Small theater"

　　在新传院学生会的微博上，记者找到了这次微小说大赛的比赛要求，不光得主题鲜明，题材不限，还得在200字以内将一个故事或场景完整地表达。看上去略显高难度的创作标准真的有人能达到吗？在毕磊菁的微博里，优秀的作品还真不少。

在新传院学生会的weibo上,Reporters found the small stage for the said requirement,Not only have distinct themes,arrange,Have a story or scene within 200 words fully expressed.Look slightly difficult writing standards really someone can reach?In BiLeiJing weibo,There's plenty good films.

　　排名第一的是一篇名叫《跳楼》的情景再现。"这姑娘长得俊的嘞，活活的好好的要噙死！"一位姑娘要跳楼，引发无数人的围观。当然，也不乏凑热闹的看客，"咋还不跳？’专注等待的人有些恼火”。但真正谜底揭开的时候，却是全民哗然，“下来的仅仅是姑娘甩下的广告横幅，‘城东楼盘9999/平米’，而不是姑娘啊！”看客们愤愤吐出一句粗口，用“报警”两个字结束了这场闹剧。故事的情节跌宕得一波三折，十分抓人眼球。

排名第一的是一篇名叫[Jump off a building]The scene again."The girl looks handsome of MAO,Alive, good to die!"A girl want to jump off a building,Cause lots of onlookers.Of course,,Also have coincided with a mere spectators,"Zha don't jump?’Focus on waiting for some of the people".But the real mystery reveals,It is a national outcry,"Down is just the girl shook down advertising banners,‘East building, 9999 / square meter’,Rather than a girl!"Spectators angrily spit out a word,use"Call the police"Two words ended the drama.The plot ups and downs this sorry tale,Very much.

　　大学生们热爱的小情感和小文艺在微小说大赛里也必不可少。于是，《瓦尔登湖》的作者梭罗也被“揪”进了一个现代工业的梦境中。一觉醒来的梭罗发现，自己置身于现代文明的烟火气中，空气污染，民工失业，加上糟糕的下雨天，湿漉漉的让人生厌。但微小说的最后还是让梭罗回到了自己熟悉的瓦尔登湖，感慨一声，“还好这只是个梦”。语意简洁利落，比起大方之家毫无逊色之感。

大学生们热爱的小情感和小文艺在Tiny said大赛里也必不可少.so,[Walden pond]Author Thoreau was also"pull"Dream into a modern industry.Henry David Thoreau found that wake up,Yourself in the modern civilization of fireworks in the air,The air pollution,The unemployment of migrant workers,And a bad rainy day,Is getting wet.但Tiny said的最after还是让梭罗回到了自己熟悉的Walden pond,Sigh with emotion a,"Ok it was just a dream".Semantics is concise and agile,Compared with DaFangZhiGu no inferior feeling.

90后作品更爱“志怪小说” 90after作品更爱"Mystery novels"

　　微小说需要的是人气，于是新传院学生会将参赛作品公布在了网上，并邀请了学院的文学老师担任了专业评审。不光是毕磊菁老师，新传院古代文学教师俞香顺也在自己的微博上晒出了担任微小说评审的感受，“独自在书房中，时时乐不可支。如果不是怕‘泄密’或是侵犯名誉权，我真想粘贴几篇。独乐乐不如众乐乐。”

Tiny said需要的是人气,So xinchuan courtyard student association will entries posted on the Internet,And college literature teacher were invited to a professional evaluation.Not only is BiLeiJing teacher,Xinchuan courtyard ancient literature teachers YuXiangShun also on his own microblog drying out as a tiny said the feeling of the review,"Alone in the study,The seventh time.If it is not afraid of‘The leaks’Or infringement of reputation,I really want to paste several articles.Alone le le than the lele."

　　记者注意到，在微博上贴出的微小说作品中，不少非文学专业的学生也积极参赛。但因为受到时下“穿越风”的影响，作品质量似乎打了个折扣。90后的孩子们作品中充满着“穿越”“志怪”等元素，俞老师也在微博里感慨“怪力乱神”：“我绝缘于盗墓、灵异、鬼怪、穿越之类，今天评阅作品，方知‘怪’、‘乱’、‘神’俨然已成主流。再贴一篇：是夜，忽感尿急，遂下床。室友皆已入眠。行至葵之榻前，此君故技重施，以手拽吾衣。吾困倦不已，不耐，道：勿闹。拍开其手，施施然如厕去。天明，方知葵昨遇车祸，其身散裂，其尸独差一臂。”

记者注意到,Tiny said on weibo Posting writings,A lot of literature is also actively participating students.But due to nowadays"Through the wind"The influence of,Quality of work seems to have made a discount.90after的孩子们作品中充满着"Through the""mystery"Elements such as,Yu teacher also in weibo"Of the disorderly god of the strange power":"I insulation in the grave/paranormal/ghosts/Such as through the,Grading the work today,We never know the‘blame’/‘disorderly’/‘god’Has become the mainstream.Stick a paper again:night,Suddenly a sense of urgency,Then get out of bed.Roommates are asleep.Before a couch to kwai,Is the same trick,With hand pulled my clothes.I get sleepy at,Not resistant to,tao:Don't make.Pat opened his hand,Shi ShiRan go toilet.morning,We never know the aoi in car accident yesterday,In the spallation,The corpse of one arm alone."

微小说要有情节，更要有现实意义 Tiny said to have a plot,Should have more realistic significance

　　为什么《跳楼》《最后一杯水》等作品能够在微小说大赛里获得较高的专业分？昨天，记者拨通了南师大新传院毕磊菁老师的电话。“微小说要有故事情节，同时篇幅也得短小。如果能有一个意想不到的结局，就更能打动人心。”毕老师告诉记者，《跳楼》一文能够获得较高的专业得分，“反转剧”的情节设置是根本，“大学生能够对社会问题进行关注，这就让作品具有了一定的嘲讽意义。”在毕磊菁看来，这篇作品隐隐还有些鲁迅文字的影子，“作品里还写到了国人的看客心理，能在200字里表现出如此活生生的场景，实属不易。”

为什么[Jump off a building][最after一杯水]Works can be said in a small competition in the higher professional points?yesterday,The reporter dialed NaShiDa xinchuan BiLeiJing teacher's phone."Tiny said story,At the same time length is too short.If we can have an unexpected ending,Can move the heart."Never put off till tomorrow what you can teacher told reporters,[Jump off a building]Is able to obtain higher scores,"Inversion of drama"The plot of the setting is essential,"College students can carry on the attention to the social problems,This let the work have a certain irony meaning."It seems to BiLeiJing,This piece was also some shadow of lu xun's words,"Work also wrote about the mere spectators psychology,In 200 words LiBiao reveal such living scene,It's not easy."

　　而俞香顺老师也在微博里表达了自己对“微小说”这一创作体裁的看法：既然忝任评委之一，不免聒噪几句：“微小说”或“微型小说”与“微博”同属“微言”，但毕竟有自己的文体特征。我的大学老师凌焕新是国内研究微型小说的权威；这次评阅作品之前，我又重温了一下相关知识。一言以蔽之：“微小说”必须要有情节，短幅之中藏曲折。（扬子晚报记者 杨甜子）

而俞香顺老师也在weibo里表达了自己对"Tiny said"This writing style:Now that your President of one of the judges,Not noisy:"Tiny said"or"Miniature novels"With the"weibo"Belong to the same"A lot",But, after all, has its own stylistic features.My college teacher Lin new is the authority of the domestic study of miniature novels;Grading the work before this time,I relive again the knowledge related.In a word:"Tiny said"Must have a plot,A short picture of twists and turns.(Yangzi evening news reporter Yang sweet son)