命题作文：那一刻，让我感动；

Proposition composition:At that moment,Let I touched;

　　此次海淀高一期中考试作文未脱离以往的命题规则，照顾了初高中衔接的学段特征，还是以记叙文体裁作为写作重心。《那一刻，让我感动》明显是一个记叙抒情类题目，我们可以《背影》等文章作为范例，写出一个记叙性散文来，也可以文采飞扬，选择抒情美文。

The haidian a mid-term exam composition not from previous proposition rules,Take care of the junior cohesion study section characteristics,Or in the narrative style as a writing center of gravity.[At that moment,Let I touched]Is obviously a narrative of lyric kind of topic,We can[figure]And this article as an example,Write a narrative prose to sex,Can also literary float in the sky,Choose lyrical and describe.

　　而这篇作文的高分标准也会是符合高一上半学期两个必修课本的写作培养要求：必修一表达交流内容要求：心灵共鸣，写触动心灵的人和事；园丁赞歌，记叙要选好角度；人性光辉，写人要凸显个性；黄河九曲，些事要有点波澜。必修二表达交流内容要求：亲近自然，写景要抓住特征；直面挫折，学习描写；美的发现，学习抒情；想象世界，学习虚构。

And this essay high score standard is also a half semester with two compulsory course this writing training requirements:Required a expression and exchange content requirements:Mind resonance,Write touch mind and matter;The gardener hymn to,Narrative to choose good point of view;Human nature glory,Write to highlight personality;The Yellow River etc,Some things to a little waves.Required two expression and exchange content requirements:Close to nature,Describes the characteristics;Face setbacks,Study description;Beautiful found,Learning lyric;Imagine the world,Learning fiction.

　　在审题中，大部分同学应该能注意到"感动"一词，所以我们想要在此文阅卷中脱颖而出，大家更应该将选材重心落实在"那一刻"上。"那一刻"可以指生活中一个令人感动的事件发生时刻，也可以是我们阅读经历中一个感人的人物行为节点，还可以是我们在欣赏自然美景时的一刻感动，甚至可以是浮士德"太美了，请停留一会儿"这一呐喊撼动内心的时刻，所以，从选材来说，本题还是可以非常广泛的。

Examines the topic in the,Most of the students should be able to pay attention to"moved"A word,So we want to be in this article reading to the fore,You should be more will select material center of gravity in implement"At that moment"on."At that moment"Can refer to life a sensational event moment,Can also is our reading experience a moving character behavior node,Can we appreciate the natural beauty of the moment when touched,Can even be Faust"Too beautiful,Please stay for a while"This cry shake inner moment,so,From material selection for,Ontology can still very extensive.

　　在行文中，我们一定要把重点落实在"让我感动"的表现中。可以通过记叙将感动的理由描写出来，也可以通过抒情的方式直接表达我们的感动。无论以哪种方式表现，我们切忌空洞夸张，一定要体现出情感的真实。

In this paper,We must put the key in the implementation"Let I touched"'s performance in.Can through the narrative will move out reason description,Can also through the lyrical way direct expression we moved.No matter which kinds of means performance,We avoid by all means is empty exaggeration,Must reflect the true feelings.

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