今天天气晴朗，万里无云，我们到公园春游。首先映入眼帘的是……同学们看着清洁的教室，擦着额头上的汗水笑了。我低下头，发觉胸前的红领巾更加鲜艳了。

The weather is sunny today，cloudless，We went to the park spring outing。The first view is the……The students looked at clean the classroom，Wiping the sweat on his forehead smiled。I lowered my head，Find the chest of the red scarf more bright-coloured。

　　“小朋友，谢谢你，你叫什么名字？”“我叫红领巾。”作文的结尾，你这样写过吗？

“children，Thank you，What's your name？”“My name is red scarf。”The end of the thesis，You write like this？

　　最近，一则名为“我们小时候作文必杀句”的帖子在网上蹿红，列举的23句几乎句句都让70后和80后“中枪”。“太经典了，都是当年的高分黄金句啊！”网友纷纷表示，“不知00后的小朋友有没有诸如此类的必杀句？”

recently，Called a“When we were children we used to slay sentence composition”Post on the Internet leap up is red，List 23 other almost every let after 70 and 80“Shot in the”。“Too classic the，Are the high score gold sentence ah！”Net friend expressed，“Do not know after, children have such slay sentence？”

　　陶妈的女儿陶陶上小学二年级。陶妈表示，自己小时候常用的必杀句，几乎没见孩子用过。“比如‘同学们看着清洁的教室，擦着额头上的汗水笑了……’这句，陶陶一般会写‘同学们齐心协力将教室打扫得干干净净，得到了老师的表扬’。”陶妈说，在23句必杀句中，只有一句孩子用得还比较多，就是“今天天气晴朗，万里无云，我们来到了××公园春游，首先映入眼帘的是……”

TaoMa daughter some ceramic in the second grade。TaoMa said，His childhood commonly used slay sentence，Almost no see children used。“For example‘The students looked at clean the classroom，Wiping the sweat on his forehead smiled……’This sentence，Some ceramic general will write‘Students make concerted effort will clean the classroom，Praised by the teacher’。”TaoMa said，In 23 other slay sentence，Only a child use still more，is“The weather is sunny today，cloudless，We came to the xx park spring outing，The first view is the……”

　　“每当遇到困难想退缩时，脑海中忽然闪过张海迪大姐姐的身影，比起她，我的这点困难算什么？”对于诸如此类的“高级句式”，陶妈更是表示，孩子从未使用过。

“Whenever I got into difficulties to retreat，Mind flashed through zhang haidi big sister's figure，Compared with her，My this difficulty？”For such“Senior sentence”，TaoMa is said，Children have never used。

　　那00后的孩子，是不是也会用什么必杀句？

After, the children，Can you also use what will slay sentence？

　　南京成贤街小学高年级语文教师俞浩淼看着这些句子，笑了，“原来的作文教育确实是这样的，模式化。”俞浩淼说，他教语文10年了，深刻感受到了其中的变化。“现在的作文教学已经基本杜绝这种‘假大空’了，要求孩子们讲真话，抒发真实的感情。”俞浩淼说，00后的孩子思维、想法都很大胆，如果觉得春游没意思，就会写没意思，不会瞎编。

Nanjing ChengXianJie senior elementary school language teacher YuHaoMiao look at these sentences，smiled，“The original composition education is really such，modeled。”YuHaoMiao said，He teaches Chinese for 10 years，Deep feelings to the changes。“Now composition teaching has been basically put an end to this‘tell’the，Requiring children to speak the truth，To express the true feelings。”YuHaoMiao said，After, the children thinking、Ideas are very bold，If feel spring outing boring，I'll write them boring，Not blind plait。

　　为了改变之前的这种模式化作文，语文课本做了很大改变，加入了一些时代的元素，俞浩淼说，“在作文的题材选择上，我们也会避免布置太多像‘扶老奶奶过街’这样的题材。”

In order to change this kind of modeled composition before，Chinese textbook made a great change，Add some elements of the era，YuHaoMiao said，“In the thesis the theme choice，We will also avoid decorate too much like‘Helped granny street’Such a theme。”

　　南京市雨花台区实验小学语文教师张忠芹也表示：“在用词上，00后的孩子们虽然还是会使用水汪汪的大眼睛、乌黑的头发……这些都是和以前相仿的，但在情感的抒发上，孩子们不会套用模式句，表达的都是自己的真情实感。”(现代快报记者 郝多)

It is nanjing experimental primary school Chinese teachers ZhangZhongQin also said：“In terms，00 after the children while still will use watery eyes、Black hair……These are the same as before，But in emotional express on，The children won't form mode sentence，Expression is his true feelings。”(Modern express reporter hao much)