小学生作文写“西瓜树”得高分

Pupil composition"Watermelon tree"Score high on

　　任课老师：不能扼杀孩子的想象力

teacher:Can't stifle the imagination of children

　　微博@Sean谦：“我们家楼下种了一棵西瓜树”。孩子，西瓜它不长在树上。

Micro bo @ Sean.:"We planted a tree house downstairs watermelon tree".children,Watermelon it doesn't grow on trees.

　　【记者追访】昨日，网友“Sean谦”发布微博晒一名学生的作文，标题是“我爱家乡的西瓜树”，第一句就是“我们家楼下种了一棵西瓜树”。作文的结尾批注：西瓜不长在树上。

[Reporter after visit]yesterday,Net friend"Sean modest"Release micro bo sun a student composition,Title is"I love my hometown watermelon tree",The first sentence is"We planted a tree house downstairs watermelon tree".The end of the thesis remarks:Watermelon does not grow on trees.

　　博主胡老师教小学三年级的语文，13日，他把一套期中考试的试卷发给学生做，14日批改试卷时让他看到一篇哭笑不得的作文题“我爱家乡的西瓜树”，是一个名叫小雪(化名)的女生写的作文，文中描述了自己家楼下的西瓜树，以及自己是怎么呵护它，希望它快快长大陪自己玩游戏。

Bo master hu the teacher taught the primary school is grade three language,13,He put a hedging of examination papers to students to do,14 when grade papers and let him see a laugh or cry thesis topic"I love my hometown watermelon tree",Is a named light snow(alias)Girls write composition,This paper describes his home downstairs watermelon tree,And how to care for it,Hope it grow up quickly with his play the game.

　　西瓜怎么会长到树上呢？据了解，有些小型瓜的藤蔓会缠绕树上，给人的错觉是依托在树上生长的，本质却是藤蔓植物，不存在“西瓜树”。这无疑是一篇缺乏相关常识的作文，但是，胡老师却给了24分(满分30分)，他说：“三年级是作文起步期，应该以鼓励为主，一步一步来，从言之有序开始再到言之有理进而达到言之有情，而且作为老师，也不能扼杀学生的想象力。”胡老师也让同学们在课堂上讨论。

Watermelon how to grow to the tree?It is understood,Some small melon vines winder tree,Give a person's illusion is relying on the growth of in the tree,Nature is climbing plant,Does not exist"Watermelon tree".This is undoubtedly a relative lack of common sense composition,but,Mr Hu gave 24 points(Full mark 30 points),He said:"Grade three is a thesis starting period,To encourage should give priority to,Step by step,From words of orderly start to make sense and then reach the word love,And as a teacher,Also cannot kill the imagination of the students."Mr Hu also let the students discuss in class.

　　胡老师说，教书以来第一次碰到这种情况，“西瓜树”归因于孩子缺乏科普阅读以及长期远离土地，因此他建议学生在阅读中积累知识，另外一方面学校和家长要多组织活动，带孩子融入大自然。

Mr Hu said,Since the teaching first encounter this kind of situation,"Watermelon tree"Due to lack of popular science reading and long-term children away from the land,So he suggested that students in reading the accumulation of knowledge,On the other hand the school and parents should organize activities more,The children into the nature.

　　网友“兴高高happy”：“哈哈哈，这孩子太可爱啦！有才啊！”

Net friend"Xing is happy":"Ha ha ha,The child is too cute!!Have to ah!"

　　网友“ 陈丹”：“好欢乐啊！”

Net friend" ChenDan":"Good joy ah!"