来自福建的三年级小学生朱尔。 From fujian grade 3 drew pupils。

　　近日，一首名叫《挑妈妈》的小诗在微博上爆红，短短时间内已被转发过万条，广大网友纷纷被其稚嫩的语言和有趣的想象力所触动，更被这首诗流露出来的一种真情实感所感动。广东省作协副主席杨克、诗人王小妮、央视主持人王凯、专栏作家沈宏非、女作家庄雅婷、网络名人胡淑芬等众多知名人物转发了这首童诗。而最令人感动的是妈妈们的感触：“谢谢我的孩子挑选了我……”

recently，A name《Pick mother》Poem in micro blog critical red，The short time has been forwarding article ten thousand，Internet users have been its fledgling language and interesting touched by the imagination，More by this poem reveal a real feelings moved。Vice President YangKe worked in guangdong province、The poet wang xiao ni、CCTV host wang、ShenHongFei columnist、Writer ZhuangYaTing、Net celebrity HuShuFen etc many famous people transmit this first children's poetry。And the most impressive is the mother of feeling：“Thank you my children pick me up......”

　　据了解，《挑妈妈》出自南方报业旗下的天空城儿童创作社区，是由一个叫“朱尔”的小朋友创作的，发表于7月28日。资料显示，朱尔是福建省福州市一名小学三年级的学生。

According to understand，《Pick mother》From the south of the city, the newspaper child creates community，Is by a call“drew”The children of creation，Published in July 28。Data shows，Jules is the fujian province fuzhou city a third grade students。

　　

将幼年语录整理成诗 Quotations will be organized into the youth

　　

参加小学生诗歌节 To ShiGeJie elementary school students

　　一个小学三年级的孩子写出了如此精彩的作品，让人不禁对这首小诗的作者产生了强烈的好奇心。为了解更多这首小诗背后的故事，记者采访了朱尔和他的妈妈郭江山。

A primary school grade three children wrote so good work，Let a person can't help to the little poem author produced strong curiosity。To know more about this poem the story behind，The reporter interviewed drew and his mother GuoJiangShan。

　　郭江山告诉记者，朱尔从小思维就比较敏捷、说话很生动，经常会说一些很奇怪的话，提一些很奇怪的问题，比较善于沟通，很擅长用语言来表达一种热情洋溢的情感。“妈妈你看见我的时候心里是不是长出一个花园？”，“妈妈，我觉得你和爸爸、爷爷、奶奶对我的爱就像如鱼得水。”这样的话经常可以从他嘴里说出来。所以，对于小朱尔能说出《挑妈妈》里面的话，她一点儿都不感到惊奇。

GuoJiangShan told reporters，Drew from the thinking is more agile、Speak very vivid，Often said some very strange thing，Ask some very strange problem，Is good at communication，Very good at language to express a passionate feelings。“Mother, do you see me in the heart is a garden grow？”，“mother，I think you and dad、grandpa、Grandma to my love is like a fish in water。”So can often come out of his mouth。so，For small ZhuErNeng say《Pick mother》Inside words，She did not surprised。

　　说起《挑妈妈》这首诗，朱尔称这是他两年前6岁的时候创作的。当时妈妈问了他一句：“你出生前在做什么呀？”结果他就回答了诗里面的那些话。由于郭江山比较留心，一直有给孩子记成长日记的习惯，所以就把标点符号去掉，将这些话记录了下来，变成了一首小诗，还发表在2010年9月的微博上。“我觉得小孩是一个特别神秘的存在，他小的时候说的话都十分稚嫩有趣，那我当时就留了个心都把它们记下来了。”郭江山解释说，“这次刚好有一个‘小学生诗歌节’，我把他幼童时期的很多话都找出来进行整理，就变成了一首首的小诗来进行投稿，《挑妈妈》也是其中之一。”

Speaking of《Pick mother》This poem，Drew says this is his two years ago at the age of 6 of creation。When mother asked him a word：“You were born in do what ah？”The results he answered in poetry the those words。Because GuoJiangShan more attention，There has always been to give children grow up the habit of written diary，So they set up a punctuation removed，Will these words recorded，Become a little poem，Also published in September 2010 the Po。“I think the children is a special mysteries，When he was a young boy said are immature interesting，That at the time I left a heart all write them down。”GuoJiangShan explained，“This just have one‘Pupils ShiGeJie’，I put his early childhood of many words are out to find out，Became the poem to sound installation contribute，《Pick mother》Is one of them。”

　　对于《挑妈妈》如今在网络上的火爆，朱尔坦言他“想不通”，而郭女士则表示“有点意外”。不过，郭女士表示，现在回过头来看这些东西，她依然很感动。“儿子对我的那种信任，那种满满的爱，这首诗全都表达出来了。而且他说这些话都是不假思索的，这些都是他心里最真实的一个表达。所以，我也觉得很荣幸，他可以这么说。”

for《Pick mother》Now on the network's hot，Drew said he“Think impassability”，Guo, said ms“A little surprised”。but，Guo woman says，Now look back on these things，She still was moved。“For my son that trust，That kind of full love，This poem all expression comes out。And he said these words are without thinking，These are all his heart the most true a expression。so，I also feel very honored，He can say so。”

　　

小诗人不再喜欢写作 Young poet no longer enjoy writing

　　

家长质疑语文教材 Parents questioned the language teaching material

　　“我到现在想了好久都不知道我当时怎么会写出那样的诗，我一直不知道。”朱尔告诉记者。

“I now want to for a long time don't know how I had written that poetry，I didn't know。”Jules told reporters。

　　朱尔今年8岁，过了暑假要上小学三年级。曾经那么有天赋和想象力的孩子，如今却再也写不出那么美好的文字了。这让身为母亲的郭江山一度十分苦恼，因为朱尔现在完全不喜欢写作，甚至对看图写话这样一个简单的东西也显得很吃力。

Drew 8 years old this year，After a summer vacation to the third grade。Once so talented and imaginative child，But now can't write out so good words。It makes as a mother of GuoJiangShan once very distressed，Because Jules is now entirely don't like writing，Even to write words viewing such a simple thing also appears very difficult。

　　在小朱尔的眼中，画画显然比写作有趣多了。“写作文让我觉得很无聊，我不喜欢靠文字去表达，我比较喜欢靠图画去表达。”朱尔告诉记者，除非老师或者父母让他写他才会去写，他自己就算无聊也不会去写作文。通常，朱尔的老师都会布置一些日记。令人意外的是，朱尔说他的文章一般都不在老师表扬的好作文之列。对此，他自己是这样解释的：“我现在跟我以前不一样了，脑袋里没有想法了，也写不出那样的句子了。”

In the small drew the eye of the beholder，Drawing obviously much more interesting than writing。“Write a composition let me feel very boring，I don't like by text to express，I prefer a picture to express。”Jules told reporters，Unless the teacher or parents let he wrote he would go to write，He even boring will not go to write a composition。usually，Jules teacher will decorate some diary。Surprisingly，Drew says he generally are not the teacher to praise good composition list。this，He is so explained：“I with me now is not the same as before，Head no idea......，Also could not write a sentence like that......。”

　　“我觉得这是成长必经的一个过程，也跟他慢慢地接受了一些学校的教育有关系。”谈起孩子的变化，郭江山有着自己的见解。那个时候的朱尔处在一个“万物有灵”的世界里，当时他看一花一草、一树一木都是有灵魂的，很容易把任何的东西都想象成一个生命。而现在，他逐渐开始走向社会化，一些原先童真的东西就会慢慢地丧失掉，所以他再也写不出那样美好的文字了。“他可能会丧失一些东西，但这是社会对他的要求，也是他融入这个社会的一个过程。这些都是有得有失、不可避免的。”

“I think this is a necessity growth process，Also with slowly he accepted some school education have relations。”Talk about the child's changes，GuoJiangShan have their own opinions。That drew in a“animists”world，He was watching a flower a grass、A tree is a wood of soul，Very easy to get any thing all to imagine a life。And now，He gradually began to socialization，Some of the original tong zhen things will slowly loses，So he can't write out that good writing。“He may lose some of the things，But this is society to his needs，Is he fit in with the society of a process。These are the trade-off、inevitable。”

　　无论是语文教材还是老师提供的“好词好句”，郭江山都不是很认可。“我不知道教材是怎样选编跟打造的，但我觉得它们并不符合小孩子的成长规律。它不能够提供美的文字，严重脱离社会生活，这是令人感到遗憾。”为了鼓励小朱尔，郭女士整理了朱尔曾经的语录去投稿参加“小学生诗歌节”，她希望把这些好的文字让更多人看到，让朱尔知道什么样的文字才能打动人心，远离那些枯燥的、空洞的文字，拒绝所谓的“好词好句”。

Both language teaching material or the teacher provide“Good words HaoGou”，GuoJiangShan are not very recognized。“I don't know how to create materials selected，But I think that they do not meet the children growth pattern。It can't provide beautiful words，Serious from social life，This is a pity。”In order to encourage small drew，Guo woman sorting the Jules had quotations for submitting to attend“Pupils ShiGeJie”，She hopes to put these good words that more people see，Let drew know what kind of words to impress the heart，Away from the boring、Empty words，Refused to so-called“Good words HaoGou”。

　　小朱尔则表示，自己将来不想当作家。“我喜欢玩电脑，玩ipad，玩电子产品。”他不会说一些大人们强加的所谓“梦想”，也不说一些很空的话，说的都是内心最真实的想法。（记者 陈祥蕉 实习生 冯珺）

Small drew said it，Their future don't want to be a writer。“I like playing computer，Play ipad，Playing electronic products。”He won't say some adults imposed so-called“dream”，Also don't say some very empty words，Say is an inner's best intentions。（Reporter ChenXiang bunches FengJun interns）

　　

朱尔的诗 Drew poem

　　

《挑妈妈》 《Pick mother》

　　你问我出生前在做什么

You ask me was born in do??????

　　我答 我在天上挑妈妈

I answer I pick my mother in heaven

　　看见你了

Saw you

　　觉得你特别好

Think you very well

　　想做你的儿子

Want to be your son

　　又觉得自己可能没那个运气

And think that you might not have that luck

　　没想到

Didn't expect

　　第二天一早

The second day early in the morning

　　我已经在你肚子里

I have been in your stomach

　　

《困》 《trapped》

　　饼干说它困了

Cookies said it sleepy

　　它建议到我的牙缝里睡一会儿

It suggested to my teeth to sleep for a while

　　我欣然同意

I agree

　　张开血盆大口

Toothy maw open

　　请它进来

Please it in

　　咔嚓

click

　　

《西瓜的眼泪》 《Watermelon tears》

　　一刀切下去

One size fits all down

　　红红的瓤里嵌着黒黒的点

The red flesh into the black black point

　　这是 西瓜的眼泪

It is the tears of the watermelon

　　

网友评价： The evaluation：

　　网友查慎说：“坐在地铁上，看到这首诗，嘴角上翘，眼眶里就有泪了。”

Find a net friend said：“Sitting on the subway，See this poem，Become warped on the corners of the mouth，Her eyes will weep。”

　　网友孤鸿泪骨：“彼得潘一样的小孩子啊！”

The net friend solitary tears bone：“Peter pan: as children！”

　　网友博越MLatinOnline：“最是单纯少年时。”

The net friend bo MLatinOnline：“The youth is simple。”