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2012-11-20
南极大陆水陆交接处全是滑溜溜的冰层或是尖锐的冰凌,企鹅身体笨重,没有用来攀爬的前臂,也没有飞翔的翅膀,如何上岸呢?它将要上岸时,猛地低头从扎入海中,拼力沉潜,潜的越深,海水的压力和浮力越大,企鹅潜到适当深度,再迅猛向上,如离弦之箭窜出水面,腾空而起,画出一道完美弧线,落于陆地上。企鹅的沉潜给你怎样的思考,自拟题目,写一篇议论文。
Antarctic continent amphibious junction is full of slippery ice or sharp ice slush,Penguin body bulky,No used to climb the forearm,No flying wings,How to go ashore??When it's going to go ashore,With a rush down from the firm into the sea,PinLi revive your prospects,Latent the deeper,Sea water pressure and the greater the buoyancy,Penguins dive proper depth,Rapid up again,Like an arrow out of the water channeling,Soared into the sky,Draw a perfect curve,Down to the land.Penguins to revive your prospects and how do you think,Since the quasi topic,Write an argumentative essay.
这是一篇看起来比较简单的作文材料,它非常符合我们常见的议论文材料特质,同时也非常符合我们常规的立意重心--飞翔的前奏,跳跃的蓄力,抬起头之前的埋头。有关这些立意的材料及观点,同学们也是非常熟悉的。面对这样的材料内容,我们首先要注意的就是审题,一定要在审题上下功夫,才能写出精彩的文章来。
This is a look more simple composition material,It is very accord with our common argumentation material characteristics,At the same time is also very accord with our conventional purposive center of gravity - the prelude to fly,Jumping xu li,Looked up before the counter.About these purposive materials and point of view,The students are very familiar.In the face of such material content,The first thing we should pay attention to is examines the topic,Must be in examines the topic fluctuation kongfu,To write a good article to.
首先,企鹅处在一个非常困难的环境中,"滑溜溜的冰层"、"尖锐的冰凌",都是企鹅上岸的外部困难;而"身体笨重",无"前臂""翅膀",也是企鹅的自身局限。这两个困难决定了我们的选材,我们的论据要尽量符合这两个特征,才能发现沉潜的真意--沉潜是不得已的选择,而不是无病呻吟。接下来我们还可以发现,"上岸"是目标,需要达到这个目标,企鹅"潜到适当的深度","适当"二字是我们可以做文章的一个点。适当的方法、适当的深度,才能"画出一道完美弧线",达到理想的目标。
First of all,Penguin in a very difficult environment,"Slippery ice"/"Sharp ice",Are penguins go ashore external difficult;and"Body bulky",no"forearm""wings",Penguin is its own limitations.The two difficult determine our selection,Our arguments will try to conform to the two features,To find out the meaning of the revive your prospects revive your prospects - is necessary choice,Not WuBingShenYin.Next we also can be found,"ashore"Goal is,To achieve this goal,penguin"Swim to the appropriate depth","appropriate"The second word is we can make an issue of a point.Appropriate method/Appropriate depth,can"Draw a perfect curve",To achieve the desired goal.
审题到了这里,我们会发觉我们的写作中心较为明确了,面对困境,改变方法,适当沉潜,达到目标。切忌将适当二字忽略,过于强调沉潜,过分的沉潜,我们可能溺于水底,与岸永隔天涯。
Examines the topic here,We will discover that our writing center is made clear,In the face of difficulties,Change method,Appropriate revive your prospects,achieve.Avoid by all means will be appropriate word to ignore,Revive your prospects put too much emphasis on,Excessive revive your prospects,We may sojourn in the bottom,And the shore and the isolation.
建议学生用"因果法"审题,辩证考虑,落于陆地的果,取决于"适当沉潜"的因。而这个因,是我们立意的中心。材料中的其他内容,特别是企鹅的形象特征,是我们选取素材的模范。
Suggested that students use"Causal method"Examines the topic,Dialectical consider,On the land of fruit,Depends on"Appropriate revive your prospects"By the.And because of this,Is our purposive center.The rest of the material content,Especially the penguin image characteristics,Are we select material model.
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