四年级学生在报纸“小小作家”板块发表了一篇题为《iPad，我好想你》的作文，短短325个字讲述了爸爸出差把ipad带走后，自己对iPad的日夜想念。

Fourth grade students in the newspaper"A little writer"Plate published an article entitled[iPad,I miss you so much]The composition of the,Just 325 words about dad on a business trip after take ipad,Yourself to the iPad miss day and night.

　　然而就是这样一篇小学作文，近期却在微博上掀起热议。有网友感叹：“这样的作文也能上报？这小朋友后台很硬啊。”部分网友质疑：“这策划真不赖，广告打作文里了！”更有网友把该文章的风格调侃为“后现代”主义的写作手法。

However this is an elementary composition,But recent hot debate in micro blog.Netizens sigh:"This composition can also report?The child back hard."Some users questioned:"This is a nice plan,Advertisements play in the composition!"More netizens to style the ridicule of the article"postmodern"Of the writing technique.

《iPad，我好想你》引热议 [iPad,I miss you so much]By hot discussion

　　从网络截图来看，这篇名为《iPad，我好想你》作文刊登在报纸“小小作家”板块，原文如下：

Screenshots to see from the network,This paper named[iPad,I miss you so much]Composition, published in the newspaper"A little writer"plate,The original as follows:

　　爸爸出差把iPad带走了，我原来每天九点之前做完作业就可以玩iPad，可这几天我在九点之前写完作业，都不能玩了，太悲哀了！

Dad take iPad away on business,I had just finished my homework before 9 o 'clock every day to play iPad,But these days I finish the homework before nine o 'clock,Can't play,Too sad!

　　我特别想日子过得快一些，恨不得爸爸今天就回来。有一次我梦见一架飞机忽然变成了iPad掉在我的手上，我就嘴里喊着：“iPad，iPad，iPad……”结果醒了。过了几天爸爸终于要回来了，爸爸是晚上九点的飞机，到家应该要十一点了。妈妈说：“你赶快睡觉吧！爸爸还要两个小时才能到家呢！”我坚决地说：“不！我要等爸爸回来！”妈妈一定要我上床，躺在床上我时刻注意着大门的动静。终于有开门的声音了，我穿着睡衣就跑出来，真的是爸爸，我一见到他，第一件事就是去“掏包”。看到了iPad的踪影，我高兴得恨不得立刻就玩起来，最后终于获得了爸爸十分钟的同意。

I want to life faster,Wish my father will come back today.Once I dreamt that a plane suddenly became the iPad off in my hand,I cried out in his mouth:"iPad,iPad,IPad..."The wake up.After some days my father will come back at last,Father is 9 o 'clock in the evening of the plane,Home should be eleven o 'clock.Mom said:"You hurry up to sleep!Dad and two hours to get home!"I firmly say:"Don't!I'll wait for my dad come back!"Mother must I go to bed,Lie on the bed I always pay attention to the movement of the gate.Finally have the voice of the open the door,I ran out in their night clothes,Is it really dad,I saw him,The first thing is to go to"Take package".See the iPad,I am happy to can't wait to play up immediately,Finally got dad ten minutes.

　　晚上，我都抱着iPad睡了。

In the evening,I all hold iPad sleeping.

　　《iPad，我好想你》出自一名小学四年级学生之手，全文共325个字，文章后方署有指导教师的姓名。然而当网友把这篇作文上传到网上后，网友们对其进行了大肆讨论。

[iPad,I miss you so much]From the hand of a fourth grade student,The full text of 325 words,The rear department have teacher's name.However, when users after uploading the composition to the Internet,Net friends on the hype.

　　从评论来看，大部分网友直指该作文写作水平太低，没想到还能刊登在报纸“小小作家”板块。还有人把《iPad，我好想你》的行文手法调侃为“后现代”主义的写作手法，“名为思念ipad，实则表达对父亲之爱。”但也有家长坦言：“非一般真实啊！简直就是俺小儿的写照。”

From the point of comment,Most netizens pointed to the thesis writing level is too low,Thought can also appear in newspapers"A little writer"plate.Some people put[iPad,I miss you so much]The writing technique of ridicule"postmodern"Of the writing technique,"Whose name is miss ipad,But for the love of the father."But there are also parents said:"Is not true!It is the picture of my children."

文章优秀思想导向有偏差 The good ideological orientation have deviation

　　要么质疑上述作文为软文，称当爹的怎么还没ipad重要；要么认为用语太口语化，不能称之为作文…….关于《iPad，我好想你》，网络上议论声四起，那么“行家”们又如何看？

Or questions about the composition of soft,Hasn't said when dad's ipad;Or think too colloquial language,Can't call composition.... About[iPad,I miss you so much],YiLunSheng on the network,so"An expert"People how to see again?

　　重庆师范大学文学院教授、古代文学与语言文字学硕士生导师王于飞表示，《iPad，我好想你》一文真切、朴实而干净，有力表达了学生内心对iPad的渴求。但王于飞认为，正是这一份真实所折射出来的物质化社会倾向，才是网友诟病的主要原因，“作文通常要求‘我手写我心’，但心是什么心也很重要。”

Chongqing normal university professor/Ancient literature and language philology tutor WangYuFei said,[iPad,I miss you so much]Are true/Simple and clean,Powerful express the students' desire for iPad.But WangYuFei think,Is this a true reflection of materialized social tendency,The main reason is the net friend for,"Composition usually require‘I hand in my heart’,But it is also important to heart what is heart."

　　新村同创国际小学六年级语文老师耿志宇从教12年，她也认为《iPad，我好想你》真实而有条理，算一篇优秀的作文。“但文章中痴迷ipad的思想导向存在偏差，对同年龄段的孩子易产生不好的示范影响。如果要登在报纸上，老师和家长应从这方面进行正确引导。”

Saemaul undong genesis international primary school Chinese teacher GengZhiYu taught grade 6 to 12 years,She also believes[iPad,I miss you so much]Real and organized,Is a good composition."But articles are obsessed with the idea of ipad orientation deviation,Of the same age paragraph the child easy to produce the bad demonstration effect.If you want to put in the newspapers,Teachers and parents should properly guide in this regard."

　　耿志宇表示，小学语文新课标中对3、4年级作文的要求是，乐于书面表达，增强文章的自信心，愿意与他人分享习作的快乐；观察周围世界，能不拘形式地写下自己的见闻、感受和想象，注意把自己觉得新奇有趣或印象最深、最受感动的内容写清楚。“好的小学作文能够通过留心观察周围的事物，有序表达自己的真实感受，并不一定非得拔高到价值层面。”

GengZhiYu said,In the primary school Chinese curriculum/4 grade composition requirement is,Glad to writing,Enhance confidence in the article,Would like to share you with others;Looking around the world,Informal to write their own/Feeling and imagination,Pay attention to his feel interesting or deepest impression/Most touched by the content of the write clearly."A good primary school composition can be pay attention to observe things around,In order to express your true feelings,Does not necessarily have to value to the high level."

　　写好小学作文，耿志宇建议把握好三原则：首先是养成留心观察周围人和事物的习惯；其次要勤于阅读优秀文章，积累写作素材；最重要的是多练笔，愿意写才能写出好文章。

Write good primary school composition,GengZhiYu Suggestions grasp three principles:The first is get in the habit of attention to observe people and things around;Second interval reading good articles,Accumulation of writing material;The most important thing is that many practicing writing,Would like to write to write a good article.

微言： Be worthy:

　　@VJ陆小可：艾玛，这也能叫作文啊！他倒是恨不得飞机掠过他家上空时，他爸打开机窗，直接撇给他，这样他就能玩2个小时零10分钟的iPad了！

@ VJ LiuXiaoKe:Emma,This can also be called composition!He is very anxious to when the plane over the past his house,His father open the aircraft window,Left to him directly,This way, he can play 2 hours zero 10 minutes of the iPad!

　　@小a_cheng：帮苹果做个广告语，因有Ipad的存在，才有对爸的牵挂。

@ small a_cheng:Do an AD for apple,Due to the existence of the Ipad,Just have to dad.

　　@益敏: 小朋友写的很生动感情很真挚啊，为什么一定要有积极向上的精神才能上报。

@ yi min: children write the vivid feeling very sincere,Why must have a positive and progressive spirit to report.

　　@梁俊棋俊棋棋棋：他爸该哭了，孩子见到他第一个动作竟然是掏包。记者 刘冰鑫

@ LiangJun chess jun chess game:His father the crying,Child meet him the first action is tao.The reporter LiuBingXin